কবিতা এক

আমার সকল কাব্যপ্রতিভা এবং জীবনের সব মহানবোধকে একত্রীত করে অসাধারণ কবিতা রচনা করেছি, যেটা হুট করে ছড়া ভেবে ভুল হতে পারে।
কবিতার নাম এখনও ঠিক করতে পারিনি। ভাবছি..

“আমার নাম হিনটি
মারি আমি চিমটি।”

এতটুকুনই। হুদাই কিছু করার পাচ্ছিনা। বসে বসে আজাইরা নকশা করছি।

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9 Responses to কবিতা এক

  1. Rrrrr says:
    October 23, 2008 at 5:00 pm

    apnar kobita’r nam paisi: NaHiMaChi (nam-er Na; hinti-r Hi; mari’r Ma & chimti’r Chi)! amar namkoron protibha apnar kabbo protibha’r shoman na? ki bolen? :-D

  2. ishti says:
    October 24, 2008 at 4:35 am

    Nam amar p ochondo hoyeche.

    Tomar namkoron protibha amar kabbo protibha ke chariye geche. Jei jinish bozhate amake 6 ta shobdo bebohar korte hoyecho, tumi shekhane ekta diye kaz chaliye diyecho! Er nam holo.. ‘Jatila Kobi’

    Amar to mone hochche ei rokom ekta kobita likhle kemon hoy, nam tai kobita. Kobitar nam thakbe, tarpor ar kichu na. Nam porei ja bujhe neyar bujhe nite hobe.

  3. Rrrrr says:
    October 28, 2008 at 11:15 am

    ek kaj koren ishti bhai, apnar jemon ekta photo blog ache, sherokom arekta blog khulen: namkobita blog. 100 post chhariye gele ekta boi ber kore felen… tokhon dekhen kemon hoichoi shuru hoye jay! (boi’tar nam NaHiMaChi rakhte paren, tobe tahole amakeo royalty’r bhag dite hobe!)

  4. Shunno says:
    October 30, 2008 at 3:32 pm

    I agree on this! You should really start writing poems or atleast lyrics.
    Shobai shob protiva niye jonmayna, protivake barte na deya holo nekami, not a credit!!!!!

  5. Pia Ganguly says:
    October 30, 2008 at 5:28 pm

    aamar tomar website bhishon bhalo legecheche. found resonance with my thought. Pia

  6. Farhana says:
    June 13, 2009 at 4:53 am

    lol….ato kothin kobita kamne rochona korlen? ..hehe r oitukun kano? :( continue koren …

  7. nadim says:
    December 9, 2009 at 12:46 am

    ISHTI vai.. apnar kobitata porlam… matha nosto, eita likhlen ki kore?

  8. Rubel says:
    August 17, 2010 at 1:28 pm

    Nah . . .amr tahle songir obab nai . .vai sit koi buk korbo. .

  9. Tasnim says:
    June 23, 2013 at 6:06 am

    remember that,jake chimti marbe at first tar anumoti niye niye…ta naholee kintu…..

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